With the necessary precautions taken, the Eventide began to slowly descend down towards the raging storm below it. At first it was calm, while the bridge's viewscreen and the ship's windows began to turn a dull grey as the ship immersed itself in the clouds - as if the Eventide had missed the storm entirely. But soon, the ship started to rock and creak as the torrential rain and wind started hitting the side. Through the walls the Eventide's crew could hear the lashes of lighting that hit the shields, attracted to the ship acting like a giant lightining rod. Engineering's adjustments to the deflector seemed to hold though, and before long the surface of Helios III's biggest city came into view.
There was debris everywhere, being flung around by the wind into buildings and streets - some larger chunks colliding into the ground with dramatic cracks. Lightning was the only illumination, as the city's power had gone out a long time ago. The Eventide's sensors could see beyond the devastation (not to mention the rain-covered viewscreen, making it hard to see out anyway), and it detected many many lifesigns still out there, needing help. That said, it would be suicide to go out there without any protection at all.
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